Does anyone point what I made mistakes in this letter, please!
親愛的主管您好：
感謝您挪用寶貴的時間閱讀本信件，我們確信您花這些時間將會是值得的。首先我先自我介紹一下，我們是黑族 (Heyxu) 管理團隊，黑族 (Heyxu) 是一系列提供資訊的網站總合而成的一個網路平台，經營的理念是『提供大眾免費、便利、可靠的資訊。』
貴公司／團體是我們用各種角度去評估，最合適也最具影響力的組織，讓我們不得不厚顏地提出這份邀請，透過您與貴公司／團體的助力，邁向便利生活的腳步必定加倍踏實。
邀請貴公司／團體參與『黑族在地生活平台計劃 ( Plan of Heyxu Locallife Platform)』，這是黑族系列網站中的新增項目，我們將這個專案擬成一份簡易的企劃書，夾帶於本信的附件中，請過目。
黑族在地生活
http://local.heyxu.com
最後在傷目勞神之後希望您能在這份黑族在地生活的報告中，找到貴公司／團體的效益和我們對這個專案的努力和信心，更希望能獲得您的參與和不吝指教。
順頌商祺
Project manager: Neil Y.K.
Cell phone: +886-919-100202
Heyxu Multimedia Inc.
+886-7-238-8116
No.178 Zhongsang 1st Rd., Sinsing District, Kaohsiung City ,Taiwan
http;//www.heyxu.com
To Marking Officer of Company:
Gentleman:
Thank you for your kindly to read this letter, we ensure you will not waste your time. First of all, we are the manage group of Heyxu(www.Heyxu.com). Heyxu is a web-bases service platform, it contents serials of websites. Like portal, forum, blog, horoscopes and advertising. We provide free, convenient and reliable information to public.
We found your company in our researching reports, the must important and influence organizes in the market. So we had to send this invite with audacity. Through your company’s join and assistance, the way to convenient life will not too far.
We invite your company to join plan of Heyxu Local Life. This plan is the new added project on Heyxu Platform. We strongest wish you can spend your time to read our simple planning file that attached in the tail of letter.
Heyxu Local Life
http://local.heyxu.com
Finally, we hope you can found the benefits for your company, found the faith to us. We sincerely ask for your join and advices.
Sincerely wishes
Project manager: Neil Y.K.
Cell phone: +886-919-100202
Heyxu Multimedia Inc.
+886-7-238-8116
No.178 Zhongsang 1st Rd., Sinsing District, Kaohsiung City ,Taiwan
http;//www.heyxu.com
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